Title: When Billy Met Teddy - Chapter 1

[billyxteddy]

Title: When Billy Met Teddy - Chapter 1
Status: Complete
Pairing: Billy/Teddy
Rating: PG for language
Notes: I'm probably a weirdo for trying a series as my first real foray into fanfiction, but whatever. This is the story that popped into my head, and dangit, I'm gonna write it!

Mucho thanks to clex_monkie89 for being my beta and brainstorm wench. This is

Comments

[bebopbeats]

Hmm, interesting that you've put them in the same school.

[jade_dragoness]

Nice. I like this.

I like that Billy has math smarts. And how the mention of the Silver Surfer neatly dovetails into how he wanted to be a hero himself.

*grins* And his crushing on Teddy? Totally cute. *happy sigh*

*goes off to read part 2*

[twincast]

cute :)

yeah, I suck at reviews :p

[magus_69]

This is very well done. I like how you quickly establish that this is indeed the standard Marvel universe, and that it is before Billy and Teddy were recruited. It also nicely captures how it feels to have a crush on someone unattainable. Bravo!

[alt_hulk]

......

A decent YA fic. I'm seriously having trouble picking my jaw up off the floor! Thank you so much for writing Billy and Teddy, and writing them decently, because they really deserve it. <3

Looking forward to reading the rest!

(For what it's worth, this is an RP journal, not a personal one, for milliways_bar.)