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bimosexual

Covalence (Epilogue)

Oct 19, 2010 01:57

They’re in a meeting when they discover it, playing footsy beneath the conference table, which is difficult to do, actually, while wearing standard issue combat boots.

But they’re pretty talented.

John isn’t paying attention to Landry, which is pretty par for the course, in Cam’s defense at least, he is mostly attempting to look like he is.

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covalence

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Links beneviolent January 6 2011, 18:45:51 UTC

Hey, I haven't read this quite yet, just copying the text into one convenient file for me to peruse later, but I thought I'd point out that (it seems) taht the links from Chapter 6 to 7, 7 to 8 and 9 to 10 are broken.
6's link to 7 just brings you back to 6. The others just do nothing.

I'll probably come back and make a comment later after I've read it. :D

Re: Links bimosexual January 6 2011, 20:59:09 UTC

Ah thank you for letting me know :)

I hope you enjoy!

Re: Links beneviolent January 7 2011, 23:53:06 UTC

Finished ( ... )

Re: Links bimosexual January 8 2011, 03:26:36 UTC

I found your mood tattoos to be an interesting plot device though I did have a minor question as to why the empathic link was one way (from a technical standpoint, not a plot standpoint; it makes sense there).

technical as in...how did the device choose? Or why I wrote it that way or...? >.<

It was a refreshing take on the normal tropes of the pairing.

Thank you so much, I was really trying to step out of the norm for the boys, and yes they are both emotionally retarded in their own special way

Aside from a few minor grammatical and spelling errors that made my fingers itch to fix them

fiddlesticks, I think I reread this so many times my brain just said no after awhile

Good read, and thanks for Epic!length fic :D.

there is a sad lack of epic length fic for john/cam :(

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brneyestx January 8 2011, 15:47:22 UTC

Thank you!!!! I do love a long read!!! I have to say these 2 are my Fav and there is so little for Cam out there.. anywhere.. but the really long ones are even fewer. I totally love a story that keeps me up wanting more, going deeper to really drag the reader along.. This was one Hella of a ride, and I enjoyed every second and still want more!!! (maybe a few one-shot to see how they are doing??..hint hint) LOVED IT!!

bimosexual January 8 2011, 19:57:30 UTC

:) thank you so much

maybe in the future they will pop up

sylvanwitch February 12 2012, 15:46:58 UTC

This was fantastic! I love the way you slowly develop their relationship, the way you so credibly express their fears and tension, and the way you blend humor and pathos. This was a great, engaging, absorbing story, and I really wanted to thank you for sharing it with us. :-)