You know I've been whining about the timeline being a mess? Reading this, it's not even consistent within a single scene. Tony makes their date for Saturday then says he's seeing GOB 'tonight'.
LOL yep, within a few lines it contradicts itself. I'm gonna fanwank it away as Tony just had a slip of the tongue, since "Saturday" and "several days later" are said more times than "tonight" which is said only once. It's pretty clear that the date is intended to be several days later.
But in this case again I think a lot of the time specific dates and stuff were hand waved my Mitch in favor of a fast paced and entertaining story xD Season 4 is so intricate and cool that I forgive them for not getting everything exact.
I know there are some errors, but I will edit and then hopefully it will be even more useful xD It was really fun to do though and it's nice to have everything all on paper.
Thanks! It was really fun, tbh. There's some errors so don't take it verbatim but I should have it cleaned up completely within the next week or two :)
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You know I've been whining about the timeline being a mess? Reading this, it's not even consistent within a single scene. Tony makes their date for Saturday then says he's seeing GOB 'tonight'.
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But in this case again I think a lot of the time specific dates and stuff were hand waved my Mitch in favor of a fast paced and entertaining story xD Season 4 is so intricate and cool that I forgive them for not getting everything exact.
I know there are some errors, but I will edit and then hopefully it will be even more useful xD It was really fun to do though and it's nice to have everything all on paper.
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