one of my poems

Aug 03, 2008 22:14

I wrote it after a man whom I loved dearly broke my heart, and it spun me into a downward spiral of severe depression.  After writing this, I felt a little better.  Now I share it with you.

The Harbour
by ~Ellie Waldner
copywrighted 2007
(last change Aug. 3, 2008)

~Not willingly her mind takes her
from the chill clear mountain peak and down,
down ( Read more... )

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ghostlion August 5 2008, 23:42:29 UTC
Wonderful poem.

I understand its sentiment well. My own life full of rejection of supposed loves, people I thought loved me, only to cheat on me and break my heart.

I am sorry for your pain. I empathize with it a great deal. Keep fighting for you, and dreaming and writing.

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prairie_berry August 18 2008, 17:37:58 UTC
I wasn't strong enough the day you replied to say a thank you, so I will say one today.

Thank You for your kind words, and I'm sorry you've felt such pain in your own heart.

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Thank you ghostlion August 18 2008, 20:54:44 UTC
No worries. I've been there. I hope your strength and rebounds and this day is grander than the last.

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