Comments | bipolypesca: MTS: Overdrive, part 1, NC-17, CLex

bipolypesca

MTS: Overdrive, part 1, NC-17, CLex

Jan 02, 2011 22:42

Part thirteen of the Manual Transmission Series is ready.

Warnings: A lot of drama and angst. Schmoop. Boy/boy sex. Alien weirdness. Cliffhanger ending. Still a WIP! If you can't take it, don't click! The final section will be available in a few short months.

Stats:
951KB (What? Hey, at least it didn't hit a meg!)
299 pgs. (What? At ( Read more... )

fic, clex, mts

Comments 44

Issue #291 pingback_bot January 5 2011, 16:52:39 UTC

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dolphinchic January 7 2011, 08:59:18 UTC

That was incredible!! I love how you wrote Bruce wayne and Mercy. How Bruce would totally understand her need for vengence it's brilliant. I'm happy Chloe finally knows that Pete knows Clarks secret and that's enough for her.

I really enjoyed reading how upset Clark was about the farm being sold my fave part was when he was putting fence posts in the ground and scared the herd lol I could see it so clearly. I cried right along with him when Lex was trying to comfort him cause I bet he named all the animals and has millions of memories growing up there. It's his home. I was so happy when Lex yelled at his parents that was so Lex. I'm glad it all worked out in the end.

I could go on and on but I'll stop there just know that I Love this story and can't wait to see the next part especially with an ending like that!

bipolypesca January 7 2011, 12:40:19 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments!

>>when he was putting fence posts in the ground and scared the herd lol I could see it so clearly<<

LOL! I know, those poor cows. You'd think they'd be used to him by now, but I guess it's less scary when he's just playing football with them. ;)

I hope you enjoy the final section when it's ready. ^_^ Thank you again for taking the time to let me know your thoughts.

jakrar January 12 2011, 09:04:38 UTC

This latest chapter is AMAZING! I love Lex and Clark and their relationship, and the complicated lives they lead. There are so many things I like in this series: Lex's struggle to be the man he wants to be, despite Lionel's best efforts to mold his son in his own image; Clark's complex reproductive system, and the desperate hope of gaining some control over it before biology proves to be destiny; the heartbreaking unfairness of terrible things happening to good people. Lex's obsession with getting the Stones to Clark is both fascinating and frightening, and I completely empathize with Mercy and Manchester Black and their respective obsessions with revenge. *shivers happily* I can hardly wait to see if the 'shadow' hunting Lionel is Mercy or Black or someone else, and I adore the way you've written those sections. Lionel is so incredibly evil here, and yet he truly doesn't want Lex dead, which makes that last scene on the airplane all the more shocking as we see it through Lionel's eyes. Incredible cliffhanger! *flails* Just a ( ... )

bipolypesca January 19 2011, 00:43:12 UTC

Very sorry about the delay in responding. What is with all this LIFE stuff?!

Thank you so much for all your comments! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I really hope you like the ending when it's ready-yes, in only a few short months. LOL!

Thanks again. :)

jakrar January 12 2011, 09:09:44 UTC

Forgot to add that I love Clark's belated realization that Lex will do ANYTHING for him, and his sense that he has to be careful with that power. *grins* I also adore Clark's certainty that, when it comes to love, Lex just isn't built to cheat, no matter how much sleeping around he may have done BEFORE falling in love. *pets Lex, who is clearly a one-alien man*

bipolypesca January 19 2011, 00:43:56 UTC

This:

>>*pets Lex, who is clearly a one-alien man*<<

Made me bwahahahaha. ^_^

priscel February 11 2011, 12:59:12 UTC

I know you've heard me say this countless times before, but goodness... I love you!!! *hugs you ( ... )

bipolypesca March 13 2011, 14:18:50 UTC

Whoa, whoa, whoa! How the heck did I miss this?! o_0

Priscilla, thank you so much! I don't know how in the world I missed this comment from a month ago (!!), but I'm very happy to finally see it to-day of all days, just before I buckle down on the final section! Hmm... Was it Fate? :)

It's so nice to read about all your reactions to the various plot points as they unfolded. You make me smile. ^_^ And, don't worry, I won't ever think you're crazy for saying you like my writing. A flatterer? Yes. One of my favourite people? Yes. But crazy? Naaaaaaah. ;) (Wasn't it Tom Welling who once commented during a radio interview, "Just because they're my fans doesn't make them crazy..."? heh heh ( ... )