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Oct 10, 2007 09:13

I woke up this morning and there was a great sadness, my chest was tight, it felt as if would burst. A strangely familiar taste graced my lips, I ran my tongue over them slowly. I can almost smell him again, and in flashes I see pale skin and black hair. The eyes are what stand out though, they seemed to peek into my soul and grasp hold of it. Who ( Read more... )

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degeneres October 10 2007, 14:30:26 UTC
You write beautifully, Thora.

El ate Portia is where you can find me.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 14:36:16 UTC
Thank you, I'll be sure to IM you. :)

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molko on meds brmolko October 10 2007, 14:36:22 UTC
Wicked sn.

There's an echo of Plath in what you wrote, it kind of remembers me of the poem where she says, "I think I made you up in my head." Beautiful.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 14:47:53 UTC
Sometimes I do think that. My imaginary playground is better than my real life sometimes. Ghost smiles and little hands to hold. Spinning fast, I scream on the merrygoround.

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brmolko October 10 2007, 14:59:33 UTC
Strangely, ones imagination can appear better than reality. I guess this is why I find myself sleeping with the ghosts of past lovers, cos everything gains a rose-tinted image when you look back at it than when you were actually living it.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 15:17:32 UTC
I seem to know whats running around in my head.

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Dose of Dita ditavteese October 10 2007, 15:19:33 UTC
I've always liked to take those sensations and write them off as the universe pointing me in the direction I should go.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 15:23:54 UTC
It still leaves me slightly confused.

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ditavteese October 10 2007, 15:34:32 UTC
I try to see it as a imprint. Sort of the way a mother hen leaves it's mark on her chick. It's not something we see or think about but when the moment happens we remember it and we know it's right.

By the way, dear. You are logging IP's. You can go here to turn that off. It makes some people panic.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 15:36:57 UTC
Oops, I'm sorry I had no idea! Thank you for letting me know.

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I am just enough of a perfectionist for that little thing to bother me. green_ev October 10 2007, 16:15:27 UTC
Oh, good, no more IP naughtiness. I love that song, pretty girl, and the dream is melancholy but the words are perfect. I'm at evidentlyeva.

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Re: I am just enough of a perfectionist for that little thing to bother me. birchthor October 10 2007, 16:21:09 UTC
Sorry I was a naughty girl, you can spank me next time we meet. And thank you.

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green_ev October 10 2007, 16:22:41 UTC
And here I was all set to blame livejournal. Trust you to come up with a better plan.

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birchthor October 10 2007, 16:26:30 UTC
Haha, I wasn't naughty on purpose. :P

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fu_durst October 10 2007, 16:42:07 UTC
american X alien, I look forward to hearing from you

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birchthor October 10 2007, 16:47:13 UTC
Ditto.

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