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POEM
Sep 23, 2004 22:50
Watching my closest friend
Pour his heart
Through his eyes
For the betterment of
My closest strangers
Makes me wish that
I had a heart.
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taintedquill
September 23 2004, 20:38:42 UTC
DUDE, Erik... this is intense stuff. Your a lot like me, with your funny punctuation and weird sintax and breaking of lines. I like it....i wish i had skill like you, boy.
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kokoleka
September 24 2004, 21:54:48 UTC
yeah, i agree. i wish i had that kind of talent. is this a true "story"?
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