Comments | biruuu: fic: falling is like this (puck/tina, pg-13)

biruuu

fic: falling is like this (puck/tina, pg-13)

May 04, 2011 00:58

Title: Falling Is Like This
Pairing: Puck/Tina
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word Count: ~4000
Summary: He doesn't understand why he keeps falling for his friends' girlfriends.
Spoilers: Up to 2x06
A/N: Written for masaysimacatch for the glee_rare_pairs exchange. Title taken from this song.

( Puck's halfway done putting his pool cleaning stuff away for the day when his left buttcheek starts vibrating. )

fic:glee, puck/tina, rating:pg-13

Comments 19

dropsofviolet May 5 2011, 20:15:07 UTC

Oooh, this really is lovely! I adore your Tina, Rachel was a treat, and Puck was perfect. The idea of them doing karaoke is more awesome than I can even explain, and the whole thing was fun and reasonable and very IC!

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:57:00 UTC

Oh wow, thanks a lot! I wanted to do more with the actual karaoke scene but I ended up running out of time :/ so I had to leave it implied, lol. I'm so glad you liked it and thought it was reasonable and IC ♥

zerodetorres July 22 2011, 02:10:36 UTC

I'm going through a huge Puck/Tina kick right now, and this was such a perfect read.

biruuu July 26 2011, 13:59:04 UTC

Thank you! So glad you liked it :D

kidenagain July 22 2011, 14:09:13 UTC

I'm just all flailing and full of happiness, eeee! Their voices were perfect, everything was perfect, and I'm just going to go read this again. ♥

biruuu July 26 2011, 14:02:30 UTC

Wow, thanks so much! This was my first time writing from Puck's POV and also my first time writing Tina at all, so I was a little unsure about it. I'm really glad to know you liked the voices :)

nonsensesqrd July 23 2011, 05:31:11 UTC

OMG I loved this so much and I am sad that I just found it.

Your Puck voice was great and you had a great fill for the other characters as well.

The beginning had me laughing in rl, of course Puck wouldn't know Tina's name and think Mike found a new chick. The abs and going to Sam for advice was very funny and read like something from the show.

I loved the end as well. Of course Puck practiced getting his shirt to ride up just right.

all that tl;dr to say I loved this and love your writing.

biruuu July 26 2011, 14:04:59 UTC

This comment is so nice, omg

I don't know what to say other that I'm really grateful you took the time to let me know the specific parts you liked. It wasn't tl;dr at all! Thank you so so much ♥

hybrid_cookie March 2 2015, 19:47:41 UTC

I love this so much. Honestly I love Puck/Tina a lot, and it's always hard to find fic about them.

I love your Puck voice, and I really liked him not recognising her, and then her revenge on him for that.