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matthoggua September 10 2009, 00:30:35 UTC
I LOVE THE ENDING

I ALSO LOVE THE BEGINNING AND MIDDLE

BUT THE ENDING IS MY FAVORITE

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biscuitpig September 10 2009, 04:34:27 UTC
YAY!

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carrot_khan September 10 2009, 02:23:00 UTC
That is awesome.

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carrot_khan September 10 2009, 03:30:53 UTC
PS - please tell me you've got someone lined up to illustrate that and are going to sell it as a kid's book.

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biscuitpig September 10 2009, 04:06:37 UTC
I can't do any side projects, isn't it sad? I can't spend any energy except in a forward direction, because it's all a big clusterfuck.

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vorrant September 10 2009, 02:29:02 UTC
You ever worry you are going to use up all your creativity young?

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biscuitpig September 10 2009, 04:06:55 UTC
It's okay, I'll just make more.

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Excellent short story galactic_dev September 10 2009, 04:24:14 UTC
Indeed! I'll wager that using your creativity makes more of it.

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galactic_dev September 10 2009, 04:25:34 UTC
BTW, may I send this around to others?

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benchilada September 10 2009, 14:12:01 UTC
carrot_khan sent me here and I owe her hugs and kisses for doing so.

How absolutely, astonishingly wonderful.

I think I'll stick around, if you don't mind.

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biscuitpig September 11 2009, 04:57:18 UTC
ok!

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revdj September 10 2009, 14:42:37 UTC
This is the best piece of yours I have ever read. I am going to read it to Francie tonight.

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biscuitpig September 11 2009, 04:57:38 UTC
YAY! It comes with free author smootches.

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