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[biskybat]

Chapter Twenty
In the Tunnel

Comments

[lizarfau]

For a moment I thought Alf was going to be a hero and save the day ...

[biskybat]

I wanted him to and had it planned like that but in the end there was no way Dick would be unchivalrous enough not to go back for Lawrie. And I would have had to have changed things so that Dick couldn't go back for some reason.

[bookwormsarah]

Agh, am on tenterhooks! This makes me remember exactly what it felt like to be six and reading my first Famous Five book.

[biskybat]

There is such nostalgic power in those FF books!