Sorry for trolling you but I looooooooove Izaya to death. I'm a little TOO crazy so hope that doesn't scare you TOO much. ^_^ I'm sure Tiger warned you.
But you srs play Izaya so well!!! But sadly I don't know how to troll very well..._-_
Yes, I LOVE your nickname for Gaa-chan!!! It is soooo cute!!!
T-thank you! Sorry about that.. I'm trying my best to work on it as English is not my first language, not an excuse, of course, but yes... Please be patient with me. /bows If you could point me to my mistakes, I will really appreciates it.
Mostly it's just tenses or adding an unneeded s here and there, haha. Then again, I might only be noticing it more because I usually look through all of one character's threads over a few days... All in all, you're doing good.
Your Izaya is awesome dude. I honestly think he is the best one I have seen on LJ. You know his character so well its almost scary!
Just a few points of crit. Your grammar and tenses are sometimes a little off, but I see this has been pointed out to you before, and tbh, I've noticed it get a lot better over the time you've played at a_fac, which is great! Also it'd be great to see a little more of his Izaya-mannerisms shining through, you know, the odd behavioral quirks that he has? Twirling about, crazy laughing, stomping phones! At least maybe with the people he knows well and trusts, so Darc at least perhaps, seeing as he must spend a lot of time with him so Darc must know how he is by now, right?
But yeah, awesome Izaya man. I can't stress this to you enough.
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I'm still progressively working on the grammar >///< English is not my first language but I'm not going to let that stop me. Please be patient with me and erm, if you see anything off feel free to drop me corrective any time!
Noted! I'll work on them! Thank you for pointing it out to me!
I love your Izaya, he's very IC and so sneaky and devious!! And his relationship with Darc is just about the most compelling thing I've ever read in an RP. They are my new OTP <3
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(I will be trolling you). ^.^
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Do let me know if you see me go OOC or stuff, first time RP-ing canon, so in all actuality, I'm insecure as hell!
(Oh noess!!! Are you Tiger's friend btw?)
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But you srs play Izaya so well!!! But sadly I don't know how to troll very well..._-_
Yes, I LOVE your nickname for Gaa-chan!!! It is soooo cute!!!
FYI, is this the right place to chat?
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You can ping me on AIM: dreamingfey
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T-thank you!
Sorry about that.. I'm trying my best to work on it as English is not my first language, not an excuse, of course, but yes... Please be patient with me. /bows If you could point me to my mistakes, I will really appreciates it.
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Just a few points of crit. Your grammar and tenses are sometimes a little off, but I see this has been pointed out to you before, and tbh, I've noticed it get a lot better over the time you've played at a_fac, which is great! Also it'd be great to see a little more of his Izaya-mannerisms shining through, you know, the odd behavioral quirks that he has? Twirling about, crazy laughing, stomping phones! At least maybe with the people he knows well and trusts, so Darc at least perhaps, seeing as he must spend a lot of time with him so Darc must know how he is by now, right?
But yeah, awesome Izaya man. I can't stress this to you enough.
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>////////< thank you anon!
I'm still progressively working on the grammar >///< English is not my first language but I'm not going to let that stop me. Please be patient with me and erm, if you see anything off feel free to drop me corrective any time!
Noted! I'll work on them! Thank you for pointing it out to me!
T-thank you, anon. Thank you!
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Thank you anon!
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