Bones Fic: Losing My Religion~ Part 2

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Title: (That’s Me In The Corner) Losing My Religion (Part 2/?)
Author: Anna (bite_or_avoid)
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Rating: R
Word Count: This part: 4,062
Disclaimer: Not mine
Spoilers: Through the Season 5 finale. Since I started this back in May, anything that coincides with Season 6 spoilers is purely me being psychic :P And, to be honest,

Comments

[doc_3]

Wow. That was unbelievable. Fantastic. See, now I can't even write complete sentences...

You rock!

[bite_or_avoid]

LOL, thank you so much! I'm appreciative of your incoherence :P

[tuberose08]

Beautiful.
You have made me realise what a complex character Booth is, how honourable and honest, and yet so conflicted.
Really interested to know where his decision is going to take him (and us).
I really liked Olivia, she was exactly what he needed
at that moment in time, and she understood him and her place in his life really well.
So looking forward to part 3.

[bite_or_avoid]

Thank you once again! I'm really glad that people are responding to Olivia in exactly the way I intended, and I'm happy that you like my perspective on Booth. I appreciate your comments!

[labsquint]

You did a great job with this chapter. You've introduced another woman into Booth's life in a way that is real and totally natural. He doesn't go looking for a relationship, he sort of falls into it (and isn't that how life goes so often?). He even has that moment of panic the first time that they make love that really made it feel realistic. He's trying to move on, but is still so anchored to Brennan. And in the end, by the time Olivia goes home, he's just so conflicted. Very nicely done

[bite_or_avoid]

A compliment from you is always the highest form of praise, so for that I thank you. I'm really glad that Booth's emotional journey and conflict rang true to you.

if we weren't going to see a romantic reunion, I like how you handled it so much better than what we saw in canon which, for me, was short and almost totally disappointing.

I can't even begin to tell you how disappointed I was with the way they did it on the show. The hug was nice, and I can understand Booth's reticence, but.... really? He just jumps right into the whole "serious as a heart attack" douchebaggery? Um.... no.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm always so anxious to hear your thoughts :D

[fourth_rose]

Wow, just wow. This is an utterly fantastic story, and I'm very much looking forward to the next part!

[bite_or_avoid]

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

[housemdwriter]

All of my comments from the last chapter apply, plus a smash of my hands on the keyboard because you have stripped intelligent thought from me. fnuiphbaf. <3

[bite_or_avoid]

LOL, somehow missed this one too.

♥