Comments | bitsy_chan: YEY! Fanfiction! :)

bitsy_chan

YEY! Fanfiction! :)

Sep 29, 2009 15:57

Okay. This is my first fic to post on LJ. I'm nervous. :))
Tell me what you think.

Title: Food
Fandom/Pair: Arashi/Sakumiya
Rating/Warnings: PG/None.
Summary: "Some boyfriend you are, Sho-chan."
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Arashi. :|

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sakumiya

Comments 9

fenina_pascual September 29 2009, 09:48:38 UTC

one word "LoL" =))

bitsy_chan September 29 2009, 09:50:13 UTC

Thanks, Nina. :))

fenina_pascual September 29 2009, 09:51:45 UTC

welcome :)

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bitsy_chan September 29 2009, 13:38:33 UTC

THANK YOUUU!<3

muharami79 September 29 2009, 14:35:09 UTC

Sho's eating habit!! lol...

but Nino's last line...whoah!!! *start having naughty thoughts on what Sho would do*

loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

boblemon September 29 2009, 17:21:32 UTC

There were some grammar mistakes, but I always like fanfics that are based off their TV shows. It makes it seem more real.

Maybe you should have gone into Nino/Sho's relationship a little more? What you wrote was cute, I want to see it continue or something! Sho stuffing his mouth is pretty cute.

bitsy_chan September 30 2009, 01:54:37 UTC

Sorry bout the grammar. :(

I'll try to work on that! I'm still working on their multi chap.
Please look forward to it! :D

Thanks so much for reading!:)

ayumi_kitty October 1 2009, 12:27:15 UTC

HILARIOUS!! I love how you portray Sho's eating habits-- messy, noise and 'like and ossan' XD

PS: I forgot how much I love Snack Pine!! I love fics based on their shows, write more please! Love your fics!

bitsy_chan October 4 2009, 08:16:45 UTC

I love Sho's WILD side.:D

Thanks for reading!<3<3<3