Fade into you.

Nov 20, 2011 16:55



FADE INTO YOU
Amber verse Lincoln and Olivia.
Spoilers for episodes 401 to 407 with implied spoilers for 408
(I made inferences from the preview, I can't wait for January it looks great!).
I don't own fringe!

Couple soundtrack:
Fade Into You - Mazzy Star
Sweet Disposition - The Temper Trap
I Don't Mind - Phantom Planet

The first time Lincoln realizes Olivia ( Read more... )

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accordingtomel November 22 2011, 04:31:54 UTC
*SQUEE*

Oh man, did I totally love this! It's like all I want to do these days (especially after last Friday's episode) is read Lincoln/Olivia fic. Despite shipping Peter/Olivia since the beginning, Lincoln/Olivia has definitely become my OTP. I love them far more than I ever thought possible, and I ship them SO HARD.

Anyway, this was a gorgeous piece. I think you did a great job of building the tension, and showing the slow development of their relationship. I like how Olivia especially didn't feel as though she and Lincoln were right for each other in the beginning, but eventually came to realize the opposite was true.

I should have been keeping track of everything I loved as I read, but believe me when I say I LOVED it! Please continue writing these two. I can only cross my fingers that the show will continue down this road, for at least ONE version of these two! Great job ♥

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bitter_backwash November 22 2011, 04:49:12 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely review! It seriously makes it all worth while. I know what you mean about Friday's episode. I was like OMG, they are on cannon. *crazy happy dance*

I kind of want Lincoln and Olivia in both universes, maybe I'm just greedy! I love the playful flirtatiousness between Altliv and Altlinc and the shy sweetness between our Olivia and Licoln. Don't get me wrong, I still love Peter. I think he is funny as hell and I love his bad-boyishness but I kind of preferred the brother/sister relationship he and Olivia had in season 1. Maybe if Peter goes back to his own timeline Olivia and Lincoln can still get together in this one.

Anyway I'm sure my muse will want to pump out more of these two but I have to find the time first!

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bitter_backwash November 23 2011, 01:33:00 UTC
Thanks so much! You are too kind and I'm very glad you liked it.
I hate to say it but I kind of hoped your self control would fail :) Mostly because I love your stuff and wanted to know what you thought of mine.

I can't get over how much I adore this ship and there are no where near enough Olivia/Lincoln fics out there. I think we should pump out as many as we can before January comes around and Fringe most likely bursts our happy Linvia bubble! Although I am looking forward to Olivia getting her powers back and going all badass.

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bitter_backwash November 24 2011, 00:20:49 UTC
" because I get so, so few comments here, if any at all"

Awww... :( I know I have commented on your stuff before. I think I did it on Archive of our own though! I left you one yesterday - username "Kit".

I completely understand your frustration though. If you're anything like me you live for that spike of adrenaline and glee when your inbox has a new review! More addictive than crack me thinks.

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kerithwyn November 24 2011, 00:24:49 UTC
mmmm, nice. Can definitely see things evolving this way. Really nicely developed and completely believable.

I'm entertained to see that the description of Greg as a dillhole is making the rounds. ;)

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bitter_backwash November 24 2011, 00:27:05 UTC
I only steal from the best ;D

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gabby_silang January 27 2012, 05:22:30 UTC
This is so great. This is really, really great, You've got a ton of incredibly spot-on and precise characterization here that just crystallizes them perfectly. This right here is my favorite insight: her cards held so close to her chest he feels like everything he knows about her he's worked out by inference.

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bitter_backwash February 13 2012, 04:17:21 UTC
Thank you so much!

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missyvortexdv March 18 2013, 23:38:40 UTC
I love the sense of slow buildup, awkwardness but understandding between them and the hesitancy they have with each other, makes it all the more intense when they finally give in. I really enjoyed this most definitely.

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bitter_backwash March 19 2013, 04:59:33 UTC
Excellent, glad you liked it!

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