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bitter_cakes

coppélia

Oct 16, 2010 23:03

coppélia
→ jonghyun x taemin; pg-13; 1716 words

( Taemin stops dancing at some point because the key has finished turning. Jonghyun catches him before he falls lifelessly on the ground and sets him on the couch. And then Jonghyun sees the most beautiful thing he’s ever seen. Taemin lips are pursed into a thin line and his eyes sparkling more than ever. )

rating: pg-13, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, pairing: jonghyun/taemin

Comments 44

minti_panda93 October 16 2010, 16:45:14 UTC

oh my goodness this was so beautifully written
:DD i loved it
taemin as a dancing doll = wow~~

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:15:22 UTC

thank youu for reading ♥

ggin October 16 2010, 16:59:25 UTC

This is captivating, really, though I was kind of scared because I don't like dolls and they give me weird vibes (hate Pinocchio) I was amazed while reading.
But idkw I felt sad about the story, yes, I know that Taemin smiled but it's kind of sad because it's the only thing he can do D:
okay, I'm gonna stop, I'm paranoid xD
love it really <333

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:16:31 UTC

captivating, is a really beautiful word for this creepy jongtae oneshot.
LMAO I HAVE LIKE SEVEN DOLLS ON MY BED, THEY'RE SO CUTE. omg, creepy me.
the only things taemin can do for jonghyun is dance and smile. /omg creepy
XD

allyouhaveisme October 16 2010, 17:01:16 UTC

aawwww this was so pretty and yes mildly creepy but i like how he's a doll and he dances and smiles at the end (:

'twas pretty :')

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:17:03 UTC

it's not mildly creepy, it's totally creepy. :)

asuka100492 October 16 2010, 17:06:48 UTC

can I have that doll too? :"> LOL
WAY WAAAAY creepy. but, heck.. if the doll looks like Taemin, hell, he could smile whenever he wants. XD but, if it's a normal doll, like the ones in real life. that'd be so creepy. okay being incoherent
this was a beautiful piece. <3
but it's sad a well. IDK why but i wanted Taemin to be human.
i mean jonghyun couldn't live with a doll for the rest of his life, that'd be so sad D': but anyway, yeah.. i love it anyways :">

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:18:28 UTC

LMAO SORRY BB, I OWN THE TAEMIN DOLL.
i'd like a taemin doll too, but i'd probably run for my life (or maybe jump out the window) if that doll smiles at me.
IT'S OKAY, I WAS LIKE "maybe i should make taemin to be human.." BUT NAHHH, IT'S CREEPIER THAT WAY. <3

asuka100492 October 17 2010, 03:27:55 UTC

but giiirl imagine taemin smiling at you!
it's like when you have a taemin doll, you have the real taemin too!..
*thinks*

naaaah.. that's still creepy..
add in a creepy music when that doll dances (like the music in one missed call)
ahkay. that'd be enough reason to throw the doll away. XDDDD

looking forward to your next pieces <3

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:32:42 UTC

oh man. you have a point with that real!taemin and doll!taemin. :3
sounds pretty tempting.
OMG ONE MISSED CALL, THAT STUPID STUPID HORROR MOVIE MADE ME CRY. i never watched any horror films after that. :(

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cassieworld October 16 2010, 18:06:32 UTC

the doll? is the doll life? angh. it;s scared me, when i imagine it. and, is jonghyun fall for taemin? whatever, i like this story so much xD

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:19:22 UTC

well, if you want to think the doll is alive, it's fine either.
jjong just feels attracted to taemin as a doll, as for love i'm not too sure.
but thanks. <3