Comments | bitter_cakes: searching through a maze

bitter_cakes

searching through a maze

Oct 31, 2010 21:56

searching through a maze
→ taeyeon (girl!taemin) x minho; r; 2370 words
warning: rape and prostitution

( It isn’t really hard to spot Minho in the crowd when you’re on the stage and when you can obviously see a man with a head taller and much more strikingly gorgeous than the rest. Taeyeon doesn’t really know how to react when she sees someone from school watching her, watching her with those burning pair eyes that she can’t seem to explain the meaning behind them. )

fandom: shinee, pairing: taemin/minho, !fanfic, rating: r

Comments 46

meltrules October 31 2010, 14:33:03 UTC

omg. this was so beautiful ;-;
♥ i loved it omg

bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 05:48:56 UTC

thank youuu ♥

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bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 05:49:28 UTC

IKR. HAHAHAH. taemin is beautiful that's why i thought of this embarrassing fic. ;A;
but thank you, i'm glad you liked it <3

akari_hayashi October 31 2010, 14:52:33 UTC

I was a bit hesitant to read because of your warning, but oh I am so glad I've decided to read this. My heart aches for Taeyeon at the beginning, and gosh, when she was raped... BUT SHE FINALLY FOUND MINHO. ;__; So beautiful.

Jinki and Gwiboon are adorable together as always.

bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 05:50:07 UTC

my warning seemed a bit too much right? HAHAHAHA.
but there wasn't too much of it, so don't worry. <3
YES SHE FINALLY FOUND MINHOOOOOOOOO. onkey are always adorable.

bopeep_achu October 31 2010, 15:08:01 UTC

this was... an absolutely beauty..

( ... )

bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 05:50:25 UTC

OMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THAT GIF. BRB DYING.

I AM INCOHERENT! maxism12 October 31 2010, 15:32:20 UTC

YOU OH YOU (TT___TT)

You leave me in these situations where I am left with no words and I am totally incoherent and I fall more and more in love with your writing and how perfect everything seems to be~ Each time I see your fic, my heart races. I read and never know what to expect and somehow I fall more deeply in love with it~ Somehow, each time I read your fic everything falls into places and I become happier then I already am! excuse the cheesiness, I seem to like this fic a bit to much

And OHMG! Choi Minho~ You seem to perfect yourself and make yourself so hot it is unfair that you are so far away for me! TT__TT

“I believe in Minho”
YES YES YES YES YES YES! I BELIEVE IN HIM TOO~ I AM READY TO BELIEVE ANYTHING AND EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM AND WHATEVER HE SAYS~ IF HE WERE TO TELL ME PIGS FLY, I WOULD BELIEVE IT WITH HEARTS IN MY EYES!!! ;~; 2Min makes me fluffy!

Minho chuckles and pushes Taeyeon on the bed, “You’re asking me to forget this face” He trails a finger down her jawline, “After I’ve carved it in my heart”.
This was ( ... )

Re: I AM INCOHERENT! bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 05:52:43 UTC

you dont know how much i anticipate your comments bb ♥
LMFAO YOU SOUND SO IN LOVE WITH ME IDEK WHAT TO DO ANYMORE HAHAHAHAH. but thank you for loving my fics so much ♥
IT IS VERY VERY CHEESY, i was so embarrassed to have posted this up >///<
YOU HAVE ME TO PAY ATTENTION TO YOU BB HAHAHAHAH

Re: I AM INCOHERENT! maxism12 November 1 2010, 10:28:59 UTC

Aww, really? ♥ Me and my long comments eh???

I am in love with you~ It's like your fics drive me crazy and I end up thinking about them the whole day! I mean fuck education

I love cheesy, though it is cheesy it makes everything so much more...i dont know fill it up for me bb ♥ (you're equally cheesy, your fics prove it)

oooo, I like the sound of that! ♥ ^_____^

bitter_cakes November 1 2010, 11:37:01 UTC

yes i love you and your long comments. aigoo you're so sweet <3
HAHAHA MY FICS OVER EDUCATION? WOW I AM SO HONORED. <3
(NO I'M NOT CHEESY DDDDDDD8 IT'S ONLY THIS FIC THATS CHEESY ;A;)

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