[Fan Fiction] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 1}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a bitch.  You won't

Comments

[rayneweather]

WOW!! That chapter was extremely well written. It's easy to feel the different emotions from each of them and be sucked into all that's going on. Their interactions are completely believable and realistic. I wish I had the words to gush on & on about what a fantastic job you did but my brain's failing me. I REALLY loved this chapter and I can't wait for future ones.

[bitter_sweet05]

Eeeep! thank you unnie! ♥ ♥ When Macha-chan was reading it on MSN, she said something about the reality of it, and the fact that she could imagine it happening right then and there in her head, and she liked that a lot. I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope I don't disappoint with the next one! *HUGS*

[nortonamo]

Omg gurl you are a great writer
better than me DEFINITELY!
But omo this was beautifully constructed, one or two grammar mistakes(read this over and you'll see them)
But the emotions O_O I could feel them.
Its like it actually happened~
I'm not much of a DBSK fan but I really enjoyed this fic :] and I will be reading the next chapter :DD

i teared up a little tbh

[bitter_sweet05]

lol better than you yet you can spot my grammatical errors when I can't. my eyes are crossing like whoa cos I've been up for 25 hours now though and I wrote a lot of this like a few hours ago haha

I'm a fan of realistic writing. XD When I can visualise things in my head, it makes it so much easier to continue on with the story. This is something that I would so NOT want to happen but it feels like it could possibly be one course that they follow, ne?

omg wae everyone cries a little at this and my heart goes "you suck you bitch" at me lolol

[nortonamo]

I like fics that make me cry~ ;_; lol /weird

but I'm a grammar nut. @@ Even though my grammar is so bad sometimes most of the time lol.

[bitter_sweet05]

I've never actually read a fic that made me cry. Pretty much the handful that I read made me giggle hysterically. XD

I am so so so anal about my grammar and spelling. There's certain things that I let slide sometimes, but I'm really terrible about it. I've reached the point where I constantly correct my friends when they post in the RPG we're members of. XD

[earthequality]

I know I quoted the opening parts I loved the most to you on MSN, but I have to repeat myself because...punch in the gut much?

Hand in hand, and with the company of three of the best brothers in the world, they set out on a path that seemed, for the most part, to be circular. Secure in friendship, the five walked side by side trodding their beaten path together. And yet, somehow, somewhere along the way, three had managed to slip from the road, off onto their own journey.

A surefire way to have someone tear up. I LOVE PHILOSOPHICAL METAPHORS.

The leader was left with only one in his care.DDDDDD: FOREVER

[limeblue14]

;______________;
w o w wjahjdaf omg this was so sad and written really well and and and and ;o;
/wipes tears away
Waaaahhh so amazing and /SAD/ *~*
You are going to update with new chapters right?~
♥

[bitter_sweet05]

omg waaaaae. Everyone cries, I feel bad. *HUGS YOU LOTS*

I am definitely, definitely going to update with new chapters. I'm plotting it all out in my head, which... is just brilliant on my part, I should write this shit down. >_____> But yes. YES. There will definitely be a lot more. I hope you'll read? ^________^;;

[limeblue14]

LOLOL Don't feel bad for writing pretty fics~ /hugs
Ofc I will continue to read :'DD

I'm loving it....

[kswildcat1]

This is really good.. I'm about to read chapter 2 now... I'm so excited.. :o)

Re: I'm loving it....

[bitter_sweet05]

:3 Thank you bb. I'm glad you like it! ♥♥

Your icon, I wanna touch him I mean wat I mean it's really pretty. :3

Re: I'm loving it....

[kswildcat1]

LMAO First, you're welcome. And second, you can touch him.. It's okay.. Just don't hurt him.. hahaha