[FanFic] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 3}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a bitch

Comments

[dreaming_col]

Okay, finally all caught up now, and... ugh, this is beautiful. Really. And I love the way you just kinda... bleed out from the future scenes to the past. It just flows so nicely from one to the other. Definitely can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Jonesing for more....

[kswildcat1]

Oh my poor Changmin... *huggles him* You're doing a great job w/ this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[satoshiice]

`Never had the separation felt so real. So raw, and agonising. He'd thought it had hurt when they'd left the dorm. Hearing their three voices... hearing them singing, without his own voice, without Yunho's... there were no words for this ache. Pressing his forehead against his knees, eyes closed tight, he grabbed Yunho's hand from his foot and held onto it.

"Hyung..." his voice was muffled, but Yunho could hear the emotionally battered tone. "You... don't leave me."

So this part seriously made me cry, it feels so real and sad and heartbreaking, I can really feel Changmin`s pain! Seriously thats exactly how it felt when JYJ first formed. Like the reality really hit that DBSK would no longer be together, it just broke my heart and this chapter totally made me relive that feeling. Take responsibility for my tears!!! ;_;

[toni_luv]

Man it feels like Changmin is the offspring out of the bunch... Separation hitting hard after the reminder of who left him. The feel of abandoned. Left. Unwanted. Dude is nearly falling into a slight depression here... Yunho is here, he's not leaving you. No matter how much you thought it was normal without knowing you were pushing him away... dis-closer of world. But y'all are slowly working through it. So little at the time.You've built a wall around you where your friends who are willingly to climb up to get to you.

[its_me_julie]

New reader here *waves*

Found this story while searching for good Changmin fics (by good I mean not fluff or cutesey) and I'm so drawn into this! There's also me being Changmin-biased, sigh... its beautiful and sad at the same time, cos what you write could very well be true. Ugh I want my 5 back together...

But really, cannot wait for the next chapter! :)