[Fic] Winter Frost

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: Winter Frost
Pairing: If you can guess, you get a cookie.
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Notes: I wrote this while listening to the orchestra version of Love In the Ice, from the Classical Tohoshinki thing?  You should also listen to that while reading it, I think. :3
Inspiration: [Click me.]
Disclaimer: It's cold here, but that doesn't mean I run with

Comments

[makesmeangry]

i know who it is. :3

and you write them so real, like this could actually be happening laksjdfcoiaefa ;_________________;

The boy that reminds me of winter frost.
i love this line sfm udek.

<333333333

[bitter_sweet05]

♥ I love you Appa~ thank you for always kinda beta-ing and then commenting too. ♥♥

[rayneweather]

I'm gonna guess HoMin. Am I right?? Beautifully written, tugs at the emotions.

[bitter_sweet05]

Haha, you're right, yes. And thank you. I just felt a sudden urge to write it, I dunno why. D: It came out decently though, even with my not being used to writing in first person, or present tense.

[jinki]

It's homin, isn't it? hahaha.

This was beautiful, oppar. ;A; You're such a great writer. ♥

[bitter_sweet05]

lol yuuuuup. :3 It is. Bonus cookies if you can tell who is who. XD

Thank you, bb. ♥♥

[jinki]

Changmin is the student, and Yunho is the one who works in the office. n_____n

/holds out hands for cookies

[bitter_sweet05]

*GIVES MANY COOKIES*

[doomsdays]

This is so pretty, and I can picture it exactly down to things like the details on Yunho's jacket, since it's obvs Homin ;)

♥ ilu but you knew that *throws rainbows and puppies at you*

[bitter_sweet05]

lol I love that people can guess it so easily. XD I wonder if that makes me predictable or if it's just really obvious.

ilu2. *snuggles puppies and humps your leg a bit*

[doomsdays]

Nah it's not that you're predictable or that it's obvious, it's just the way you describe things is just them if that makes sense? Like Yunho being all nurturing and Changmin trying to hide unpleasant things from him.

[bitter_sweet05]

lolol god I just realised that... I write them like that more times than not, don't I. Not that I've written a lot of fic overall but Changmin does a lot of hiding and Yunho does a lot of mothering.

[ryukokoro_oppa]

The HoMin love <3333 I knew it was Yunho ..but I only got Changmin at the ending. :DD

[bitter_sweet05]

lol how could you not get Changmin until the end. D: