Comments | bittereternity: you're just a phone call away (g)

bittereternity

you're just a phone call away (g)

Nov 14, 2009 02:12

Duuuuude. I really need to get down to studying for the Very Important Exams that are round the corner. Which doesn't explain why I spent the whole day writing. I wrote a lot of original stuff (it wasn't particularly good writing, but hey! it was writing!) and then a vague idea of this suddenly came into my mind. I'm not really pleased with it, but ( Read more... )

pairing: barney/robin, character: barney stinson, fandom: how i met your mother, character: robin scherbatsky

Comments 19

tjammy November 13 2009, 21:02:03 UTC

This made me feel soooo sad! Your writing style is just lovely. I can feel Barney's sadness and emptiness.

bittereternity November 14 2009, 10:13:11 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad the tone of the fic worked for you. I wasn't sure if I managed to write Barney without making him completely OOC.

suburban_sun November 13 2009, 21:30:40 UTC

Wow, this was lovely. Really. Bittersweet and just a little heartwrenching. Lovely.

bittereternity November 14 2009, 10:14:06 UTC

Thank you very much for the wonderful comment! =)

magpieinthesky November 13 2009, 22:49:31 UTC

Your writing style is so beautiful, and you really captured the realities of the breakup. I really like this idea, and you executed it in such a lovely way. Thanks for sharing!!

bittereternity November 14 2009, 10:14:42 UTC

Wow. Reading your comment makes me all warm and fuzzy!
Thank you so much for reading and liking.

thefrug November 13 2009, 23:07:52 UTC

I love your writing style and this story is so bittersweet. I really hope they find their way back to each other in the show. The build-up was so long and then it was so shortlived.

I love the story a lot! Keep up the nice work!
<3
Shan

bittereternity November 14 2009, 10:17:30 UTC

I know! I hope they find their way back to each other too. They spent so much more than a year building up the relationship and bam! it's gone in a few weeks? That kinda sucks...

But, glad you liked the fic! Thank you very much. XD

secondmezzanine November 13 2009, 23:55:02 UTC

Oh god, this was just amazing. So, so heartwrenching and beautiful and sad with little bits of humor thrown in (Robin's dinner of alcohol vs. butterscotch for example, haha). It's so smooth. I love how it's broken up into sections, with the last line of each packing a little punch.

You awesome writer you. :)

bittereternity November 14 2009, 10:18:59 UTC

Wow, thank you very much. Your comment really means a lot to me! I'm pleased that the section thing worked for you, I wasn't sure it would flow nicely.

Thanks very much for that wonderful comment! =)