fic: only fools rush in (house m.d.)

Mar 30, 2013 02:55

Title: only fools rush in.
Fandom: House M.D.
Pairing: Gregory House/James Wilson
Words: ~3.8k
Notes: . This started out as light-hearted, but turned fluffy on me really fast. So yeah, major fluff warning, I guess? It feels absolutely *great* to be writing housefic again.

Summary: so take my hand, and take my whole life too. Or, the one in which ( Read more... )

character: greg house, fandom: everybody lies, character: james wilson, pairing: house/wilson, sometimes i write

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Wow... anonymous March 29 2013, 23:56:06 UTC
Beautiful....and very IC/believable. More, please!

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Re: Wow... bittereternity March 30 2013, 06:12:37 UTC
Thank you!

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srsly_yes March 30 2013, 02:37:06 UTC
Glad your back writing. Loved how Wilson slowly awakened to the realization that he was in love with House and that House was in love with him.

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bittereternity March 30 2013, 06:13:37 UTC
I don't think I can ever stay away from House for very long, heh. Thank you so much for reading!

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sassyjumper March 30 2013, 13:15:42 UTC
You had me at Pablo Neruda -- Love him.

So this is just wonderful. I seriously love it. I could see and hear the first exchange between H/W so vividly. Same with the W/Cuddy and W/Foreman scenes. Especially Cuddy - you wrote her perfectly. The way Wilson reveals his feelings to House, and House's reaction to it, are so great and completely believable:

I don’t mean it in just a drunk and manly sense, although I love you like that, too.

Hah. Just one example of some lovely IC dialogue. *I'm* glad you're writing again, too. Hope to see more :)

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bittereternity March 30 2013, 19:11:44 UTC
I'm not normally a fan of romantic poems, but there's something about Pablo Neruda's words that just takes your breath away!

Anyway, thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'm glad you read and liked it. I was struggling a little with the concept of love and House/Wilson, so I'm really glad this worked for you. :)

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menolly_au March 30 2013, 20:54:08 UTC
Oh, that was lovely. House bringing Wilson his favourite chips, Wilson's epiphany that he was in love with House, the conversation with Cuddy (duh, we already knew that - lol). Foreman protecting House from Wilson, a nice echo of Wilson protecting House from Cameron all those years ago (and after all, Wilson is the one with the history here).

I love House's response to Wilson telling him “Well, that…rules out porn for the next movie,” - lol, perfectly House.

And this here was my favourite passage

“You have three ex-wives,” he says. Wilson blinks at the segue, and resorts to nodding carefully.

“You loved them,” House points out, and suddenly Wilson has a better understanding of Cuddy in her office with her world-weary sighs.

“I know that,” he says carefully and slides into a chair. House looks at him like he’s expected to continue.

“I’ve only ever had one of you,” he finally mumbles

That last line sums up what Wilson means to House beautifully. Lovely writing.

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bittereternity March 31 2013, 07:13:27 UTC
Thanks so much for reading!
I love how you figured out *exactly* what I was thinking behind writing each section. And I had to make Cuddy a H/W fangirl because the other option of her and House together was really not...palatable.

I'm glad this fic worked for you! :)

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pinigir March 30 2013, 22:16:16 UTC
Loved it! :-)

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bittereternity March 31 2013, 07:17:56 UTC
Thank you!

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