Here we go again...

[bizarrostormy]

So I have been working on a story for the past few days and I think it is turning out pretty good. Any suggestions would help alot and I will post more once it is written.

Well, here is what I have so far...
Flash

Comments

[serips]

I like the flashes...and I really like the ideas behind the story. It needs some work, but it has the potential to be really amazing.

[nathangrey]

it is good and shows a lot of promise... but you need to write more and there is lots of work yet to do. i cant wait for the next part.