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Theme #4: Outdoors...3 of 8

Jul 14, 2007 19:10

TITLE: Going Out
AUTHOR: Xie
WARNINGS: This is a porn challenge. It’s porn.
A/N: Set somewhere in the “Only Time” Xieverse, maybe a year or two post-Risks. Beta'd by the porny lovely testdog65.
( Going Out, by Xie )

theme #4: outdoors, author: xie_xie_xie

Comments 38

happier_bunny July 15 2007, 04:47:52 UTC

Did you say something?

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I think I'm on the ground with Justin.

xie_xie_xie July 15 2007, 06:25:39 UTC

*blushes*

rosy5000 July 15 2007, 05:31:21 UTC

So incredibly HOT! *faints*

>Or maybe I just murmured against his skin. Maybe it was just his name.

Those two lines just... so simple, but so right. :D

xie_xie_xie July 15 2007, 06:26:01 UTC

Thank you so much!

what was said firehead30 July 15 2007, 05:44:54 UTC

I feel like you took a snapshot of Brian and Justin and painted it with heat, framed it with intimacy, and finished it with communication. Everything is richly drawn, but I felt each detail, each moment, each action and reaction.

Brian’s hand slapped at my ass and I pushed back harder. Burning everywhere, in my ass, my hands, my knees, my mouth from kissing him while we danced, before I ended up here on my hands and knees. On the pavement, Brian’s teeth biting at the skin on the back of my neck. Each detail builds into the next action. Each touch taking them to tne next level.

His hand came down and covered mine. He was leaning over my back, curling around me. I lifted my hand and he slipped his under it, palm down.

I felt the heat of his skin burn into the raw places on my hand, little bits of grit between us. I felt the head of his cock bump over my prostate, the feather touch of his breath on my neck, his jeans rough on the back of my thighs. And everything burning hotter and hotter inside me Everything you depict is ( ... )

Re: what was said xie_xie_xie July 15 2007, 06:26:43 UTC

Thank you so much, my darling! I think your feedback was as long as my little porny fic. ;)

Xie

claddagh_girl July 15 2007, 10:46:36 UTC

*fans self*

It's after reading fics like this I wish I had been born a gay man.

mmm. That was... yum.

xie_xie_xie July 16 2007, 00:41:49 UTC

LOL, your icon totally amused me! And thanks!

zaipixie July 15 2007, 10:50:32 UTC

*holds it together long enough to write this*

Oh my!

Doggie-style on the pavement! You never ever disappoint. Never. Ever.

*dissolves into big puddle of goo*

xie_xie_xie July 16 2007, 00:42:24 UTC

Awwww THANK YOU!

And your icon is PERFECT for this fic!