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Theme #4: Outdoors...7 of 8

Jul 14, 2007 19:29

Title: A Six-Letter Word He’d Never Use
Author: not_yet_defined
Warning: porn, light bdsm
Timeline: The summer following 513
A/N: no time to beta...surprise wedding today...so hopefully not terrible. :D This is for paddies who expressed a desire for some bdsm!b/j on my journal awhile back.

( A Six-Letter Word He'd Never Use )

author: not_yet_defined, theme #4: outdoors

Comments 44

lunachickk July 15 2007, 01:21:32 UTC

That was lovely! Tied up and debauched!Justin is rapidly becoming one of my favorite things for some reason. ;)

That must have been a nice strong lounge chair!

not_yet_defined July 15 2007, 01:45:18 UTC

yeah, i'm fond of him also.

That must have been a nice strong lounge chair!

Brian only buys the best...it was probably customed designed for just these sorts of potential needs. lol.

thank you :D

singlewoman July 15 2007, 01:35:48 UTC

Very hot. I really like the sports analogies: ridden in the stables, slammed on the tennis court.

BDSM is a real fav of mine, and this was so well done.

not_yet_defined July 15 2007, 01:43:43 UTC

Thank you very much. :D

The sports analogies are all justin, from the tragic discussion in 513.

blushing here foreverfolked July 15 2007, 02:08:52 UTC

Like seriously drooling here. Perfection!
-Rory

Re: blushing here not_yet_defined July 15 2007, 04:47:24 UTC

drool is good! thank you :D

a preference for cuddling firehead30 July 15 2007, 03:38:07 UTC

It seems to me that Brian simply needed to figure out exactly when to cuddle. Good thing Justin was there to help guide him in this most important learning experience.

FUCK ME that was hot. It was also intimate, affectionate, funny and sensual. I love this sort of kink, where there is trust, yet enough of an edge to keep things fresh and hot.

“So I suppose now I have to slam you on the tennis court?”

“Or we could just cuddle." hehehehehe

Justin looked into Brian's face and he stared back, eyebrows raised, calmly waiting for Justin to comply. Justin laid both his arms over his head against the lounge, buried his face against the soft material and relaxed. I could see this playing out in my head. Justin's desire to play, yet wanting this type of play unseen, his trust in Brian implicit allowing him to relax.

He stroked his cock with one hand while he gently threaded his fingers through the silky blond strands before tightening his fist around them. He roughly pulled Justin's head up by his hair ( ... )

Re: a preference for cuddling not_yet_defined July 15 2007, 04:46:56 UTC

i think your feedback made me orgasm. sooo good.

and i'm so glad you appreciated the part about checking the ties and checking in with justin about the ties, cause that is one of my absolute favorite parts.

thank you so very much fire.

happier_bunny July 15 2007, 04:24:46 UTC

I liked how they both had so little control in their NEED for each other.

This was hot. Me likey. :)

not_yet_defined July 15 2007, 05:17:52 UTC

Thank you Bunny :D