sm_monthly January Theme 13 - Betrayal

Jan 28, 2009 21:23

Beset - Lady Mars

the feel of her name

1. the forest

I've been so lost since you've gone
Why not me before you?
Why did fate deceive me?
Everything turned out so wrong
Why did you leave me in silence?
--Forgiven by Within Temptation

2. the soundless

Why did you leave me in silence? )

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lovelylytton January 29 2009, 17:31:00 UTC
Amazing! I didn't see the ending coming at all. I like how you've described Mars' and Venus' friendship, the name Beset is also very fitting. Incredible use of the prompt.

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bjfactory January 30 2009, 01:05:11 UTC
Thank you very much for your comments. I truly appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think!

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