broken one

[black_acres]

You followed me home
and ripped out my heart
what more is there
than darkness

you found my one weakness
played me for a fool
knew what to say
and pulled the right strings

you hit all the right notes
and made me obey
and I was the broken one
laying on the floor

and you laughed......

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[silent_romance]

you turned your head
and walked away
until you were ready
to use me all over again

my tears begin to dry
as i hide every word coming from them
all i ever did was love you
and you took that love away

when i turned around
you were laughing
and then i walked away...

heh, i got bored and just started writing more to this.

your poetry always amazes me, love.

[silent_romance]

also, i left a comment on your like first writing i think in it.
not sure, but i left a comment.