THIS IS AMAZING... i am in true awe of this. never have i read an OT3 that has left me with such emptiness. i love yesung and kyu like you wouldn't believe *has yet to go through her official wookie phase* but wow. i almost started hating ryeo in this, i was all like "how dare he trigger yesung like that the little ingrate?" but then i was like... "calm down love... it's just a story".
it was very strong and left a huge impact in me. and it killed me how even though kyu wasn't even present in the room he was such a major character and necessity to the story. PROPS to you my love...
and oh my god i had an orgasm when i saw your journal... you need to point me in the direction of where you got this from so i can start stalking it. hannie! *dies*
That...was so sad! ;____; Poor Yesung has lost Ryeowook to Kyuhyun, and he just can't let him go. It's awful that Ryeowook is still with Yesung when he seems to have more feelings for Kyuhyun, and that Yesung stays with him, but the human mind is beyond comprehension, and I don't even pretend to understand.
It's so sad that Kyuhyun was the newcomer, but Yesung is the third wheel. It's nice that Kyuhyun involves Yesung "...likes the way his face looks when he's gasping and writhing under Yehsung's hands." It shows that Yesung can be dominant with him, but who knows how he feels about the whole thing.
*Sigh* You really hit me. It's upsetting that things aren't so good in the relationship, but a bit of heartbreak - especially when it's well written - makes for an amazing story <3 I really loved this one.
I wouldn't worry just yet - Yehsung still has a few tricks up his sleeve. I've got a second part to this written, which should be posted soon, and we get to see Yehsung get his own back on Ryeowook ;)
I'd really like to see some Yesung/Kyuhyun action, though. Oddly...you've made me a fan XD I can't wait tos ee the next part of this! AUGH! Bring it on, baby! I'm ready! <33
Kyuhyun is young, and is eager to please Yehsung - hyung, like this, hyung? -
That was hot. So was this:
More, more, Ryeowook gasps.
And the whole fic was just sexy and amazing. XDD I don't know if I commented on your last fic (I should have, I'm sorry... x__x), but it was just as amazing. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you~
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it was very strong and left a huge impact in me. and it killed me how even though kyu wasn't even present in the room he was such a major character and necessity to the story. PROPS to you my love...
and oh my god i had an orgasm when i saw your journal... you need to point me in the direction of where you got this from so i can start stalking it. hannie! *dies*
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It's so sad that Kyuhyun was the newcomer, but Yesung is the third wheel. It's nice that Kyuhyun involves Yesung "...likes the way his face looks when he's gasping and writhing under Yehsung's hands." It shows that Yesung can be dominant with him, but who knows how he feels about the whole thing.
*Sigh* You really hit me. It's upsetting that things aren't so good in the relationship, but a bit of heartbreak - especially when it's well written - makes for an amazing story <3 I really loved this one.
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I'd really like to see some Yesung/Kyuhyun action, though. Oddly...you've made me a fan XD I can't wait tos ee the next part of this! AUGH! Bring it on, baby! I'm ready! <33
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That was hot. So was this:
More, more, Ryeowook gasps.
And the whole fic was just sexy and amazing. XDD I don't know if I commented on your last fic (I should have, I'm sorry... x__x), but it was just as amazing. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you~
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you're making me cry. oh, yehsung. T.T
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