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black_light88

Desire Theory

Nov 01, 2005 22:47

On a bright summer day ( Read more... )

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Writer's comments black_light88 November 2 2005, 04:06:31 UTC

It's the Brendan love song and part 5 in the series. It's a love song which is low on mush. WOO! And it's very, very me. Almost makes you wonder if it has any inspiration...?

random_laughter November 2 2005, 05:00:45 UTC

Kinda shows it's not a form you're used to writing in. And by form I mean subject, I guess. I dunno. It's good but it doesn't scream "BRENDAN". I think you'd have to be in love to write a proper love song.

Well, the night slips away
I don't want to be alone again
You're burned in my brain
I can't sleep
But I'll dream tonight

...Who hasn't been there...

Oh, and the last verse is very you talking.

black_light88 September 4 2006, 03:59:50 UTC

I really need to rename this...suppose that's a new goal...

black_light88 September 4 2006, 04:01:15 UTC

Done...for now. Open to other ideas for a name, even non-theory ones. This was just something to tide it over.