Footie RPS Ficlet: Die Tränen von Nürnberg (Arjen/Ronnie, NC-17)

Jul 05, 2006 18:39

Die Tränen von Nürnberg
by ~Dracaena~

Disclaimer: This is not real, it's fiction. I don't know them and I don't own them. Both are straight in the real world and I mean no offense with this.

Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Pairing: Arjen Robben/Cristiano Ronaldo

Summary: The night after the Portugal - Holland game Arjen gets a surprise visit from ( Read more... )

arjen robben, fic, cristiano ronaldo

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kniggit_slash July 6 2006, 02:41:32 UTC
*happy sigh* That was what I needed. I needed a good ending fic. Thank you so much dear for writing this. It was so soft and tender, that's my favorite kind.

*strokes this* Yes, I really really liked it. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

It was so good. I started crying in the middle of it but that wasn't your fault, that's my emotions coming out but the ending...yeah, that made me feel good.

Great job.

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blackdracaena July 6 2006, 10:29:20 UTC
Don't I usually always write good ending fics. Although I could have spent much more time on this ending actually. *sighs*

Thank you, darling for the lovely feedback. You know I always treasure your feedback. *hugs*

And awww, I know all about crying and emotions surfacing but give it a few days and it will be all better. Easy to say... but I just felt as heartbroken after Holland got kicked out. *hugs you some more*

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blackdracaena July 6 2006, 10:30:24 UTC
Thank you! *squishes* And hey, any comment is appreciated no matter if it's one line or 5 paragraphs. Just hearing that you liked it makes me smile. *squishes*

And seeing you using my icon also makes me smile. :D

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petarrr July 6 2006, 11:37:02 UTC
That was so sweet and really quite hot. Great work!

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blackdracaena July 6 2006, 13:01:07 UTC
Thank you! :)
Happy to hear you enjoyed it.

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niamh_x July 6 2006, 15:02:15 UTC
Adore it! :-)

It's the little things you get in about their natures that makes the way you write these so beautiful. The way Christiano sleeps, and how Arjen sometimes feels bashful...the shaving, the hair - it's perfect.

Great fic, love! -hugs-

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blackdracaena July 6 2006, 15:50:36 UTC
Umm... thanks! *blushes*

And my god, I'm so glad that you mentioned the details! The funny things is, most of the details actually come from RPG scenes leetje and I did. Like the bracelet (Arjen gave a bracelet to Ronnie on his 20th bday), or the Red Bull/vodka which is actually something Ronnie drinks etc. And then the shaving bit is actually REAL, Arjen apparently shaved his legs 2 days before the Portugal game. I was all hee... when I saw his smooth legs in the training pics.

Thanks again for the feedback and I'm really really happy you enjoyed reading the ficlet. *hugs back*

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niamh_x July 6 2006, 20:15:16 UTC
It's that that makes your fics of these two so ace, because you know them inside out, you really sense their relationship and you write that fantastically :-)

Aw, leg shaving? That's quite a nice image, what d'you think? -blushes and hides-

No probs, 'tis well deserved! Thank you for posting the fic! :-D

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carla_g July 6 2006, 15:38:14 UTC
Awwwwwww, so sweet and lovely)))))
And Arjen is... hm.. is so defenceless here. But he shaved! Good boy)))
Great fic! Thank you))))))))

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blackdracaena July 6 2006, 15:57:27 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. :D
So happy you liked it!
And Arjen did shave... not just in the fic... so double good boy. ;)

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