Mountains [Harry Potter Fic]

[blackestfaery]

Just because I'm taking a break from Draco/Hermione does not mean I'm going to stop writing. Nope. I said I'd do it someday and here it is-my first Harry/Hermione :)

Mountains
Series: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Hermione, implied Ron/Hermione
Rating: G
Word Count: 506
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Comments

[madderbrad]

Wah! Another story with our heroes still married to Weasleys. :-(

Years past the point where she should have laced her fingers with his and tugged back and said not her, Harry. Me.

Well at least she realises it NOW. Sadly this isn't a case of "better late than never".

Still, it's very nice to think that Harry is there with his best friend during her first pregnancy.

[blackestfaery]

Still, it's very nice to think that Harry is there with his best friend during her first pregnancy.

I firmly believe Harry would be like a second father to the baby, especially when Ron can't be around. I can't imagine any other way they would be, you know?

Wah! Another story with our heroes still married to Weasleys

Hermione's married but I actually wrote this with the mindset that Harry wasn't. But yes, she's much too late in this instance BUT NEVER FEAR. I will be writing happy fic of these two. Just gotta work my way through the angsty plot bunnies for now :)

Thanks so much for reading. I really appreciate it!

[mihnn]

It's official! I love your Harry/Hermione as much as I love your Draco/Hermione. This is so lovely. Harry playing with the car, a way of manifesting his lost childhood as well as the lost opportunities both face was absolutely gorgeous. I love subtlety. And you wrote this moment so well.

[blackestfaery]

Thanks so much, bb! I knew I recognized your name from somewhere :)

I promise that I'll write happy Harry/Hermione too, but this was the first scene that popped into my head when I started to write HHr. I didn't even realize the part about Harry's lost childhood, but it just goes to show you what readers can see that you can't as the author!

[mihnn]

Actually, the sad H/Hr with the lost opportunities is my guilty pleasure. I think that's what drew me into the pairing. That and Ginny coming out of no where in the 6th book so that Harry wasn't alone. Personally, if the book ended with no epilogue and Harry having no one, it would have been more powerful for me. But that's just my opinion :)

[blackestfaery]

It was all so romantic and sweet, then you tore my heart out at the end!

LOL. This is exactly how I feel about reading the books expecting a Harry/Hermione ending and then getting blindsided by the Harry/Ginny. I can tell you, I had the biggest WTF expression on my face when I read HBP. Ah, always denied what makes sense >:(

And thank you so much, Krissy. I was a bit nervous posting this&mash;new fandom, a whole new set of readers, but the response so far has been lovely and very encouraging. There's more to come. Promise :)

[blackestfaery]

Oh, I saw the Ron/Hermione from book 2, but the Harry/Ginny part? Completely just dropped in HBP. I remember Harry just up and realizing he was head over heels in love with Ginny because she was the source of the smell he remembers from summer. And that whole jealousy thing when she was off sucking face with a bunch of guys. UGH. Can't do it.

I don't hate Ron/Hermione, but it just seems so illogical to me *shrug* I think that's better than out and out hating the pairing amiright?

And yes, I do agree. Draco/Hermione would have never happened in JKR's world, but that's half the fun with writing them-or any non-canon pairing really :)

[notice___me]

I loved this especially Harry with the toy car and oh Hermione. Good piece. Hope to see more :)

[blackestfaery]

Thank you very much :) I hope to write more and soon.

[utkari02]

Oh. You break my heart with your lovely lovely words.

This was achingly beautiful.

[blackestfaery]

Thank you! I'm so happy people are enjoying it. I promise to write something a bit more happy very soon :)

[teenage_hustler]

pleased to see that everyone seems to be enjoying it. :)