Limbo [Harry Potter Fic]

May 07, 2011 00:00

Yeah. Another one :)

Limbo
Series: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Hermione, but canon compliant
Rating: G
Word Count: 563
Summary: ( can I keep this )

harry/hermione, harry potter fic, harry potter

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Comments 13

almondoil May 7 2011, 14:49:18 UTC
Ohhh. :') That was beautiful, and bittersweet. I love your little HHr post-Epilogue sneak peeks. What about a long fic? :*

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blackestfaery May 7 2011, 15:06:44 UTC
Thanks, Alex :)

As for a longer fic, I am working on one. It's called Small Crimes. If I can stick to it, it should be ready sometime this year.

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onceuponapillow May 7 2011, 19:17:21 UTC
That was just painfully beautiful. I just loved Harry watching Hermione and James and longing to be a part of that moment.

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blackestfaery May 7 2011, 21:17:21 UTC
Thank you very much. I had deliberated over whether I wanted Hermione to catch him watching her and James but decided against it. There was something about letting Harry realize things on his own, standing in the space between, that seemed right.

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madderbrad May 7 2011, 23:05:03 UTC
Very nice. But very sad. Silly Harry.

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blackestfaery May 8 2011, 01:15:26 UTC
He is, isn't he? He's got the worst timing too

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scattered_star May 8 2011, 00:11:54 UTC
This is beautiful and heart-rending and so bittersweet.

I love how the simplicity of the scene is such a contrast to Harry's internal monologue.

You have a real talent. This is a gem.

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blackestfaery May 8 2011, 01:50:27 UTC
My goodness. This was such a lovely review!

Harry always struck me as someone who latched onto a thought and went okay, what next and can we start now and what do you mean I have to wait. If I had my way, he would've been allowed to keep what he saw *nods*

Thank you so much for reading. Your comments have really encouraged me to keep writing this pairing :)

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heliconian_julz May 8 2011, 01:04:28 UTC
Sigh. That was painfully beautiful. You capture each moment with such bittersweet tenderness and just... guhhh. I was listening to Moonchild by Segal while reading and it just set the whole thing off.

Beautiful. I can't wait to read more from you.

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blackestfaery May 8 2011, 02:07:19 UTC
Beautiful. I can't wait to read more from you.

Thank you so much. I have plenty more where this came from, and I can guarantee that you'll be seeing more from me in the near future. I'm a big fan of writing to music, but in this case, I was killing time for the last half hour at work. I'll have to listen to that song now and re-read :)

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