Reminder [Naruto fic]

Sep 23, 2011 20:51

Warning: Second person POV. Because I wanted to try it out. Apologies to those who get thrown off by it.

Reminder
Series: Naruto
Pairing: Kakashi/Sakura
Rating: PG-13 to be safe
Word Count: 599
Summary: ( You sometimes forget who he is )

naruto fic, kakashi/sakura

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catssyclaws September 24 2011, 05:47:14 UTC
Aaaaiiii! XD I loved it! You did a really great job with the second person! And the imagery. *_* RAWR KAKASHI! <3

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blackestfaery September 24 2011, 18:55:36 UTC
Heeeeee! Thanks, hun.

I always figured Kakashi to be a dominant. All that repressed energy has to be released somehow ;)

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catssyclaws September 25 2011, 05:35:05 UTC
I think so too! He'd definitely know how to man-handle in -ALL- the right ways. /buh/

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leafytoo September 24 2011, 13:54:43 UTC
Woo. I'm just sitting down to write and this little tidbit got my motor running! Loved it.

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blackestfaery September 24 2011, 18:56:48 UTC
Thank you! Glad it could help with your writing-the last chapter of Hirameki was incredible :)

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juniper_11 September 25 2011, 00:17:25 UTC
I must admit I like a dominant Kakashi myself.

But the line that stood out to me the most is this one: because while you both know he can take it if he wants, you also both want no regrets in the morning.

I like this. Very nicely written.

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blackestfaery September 26 2011, 05:20:19 UTC
Thank you so much :)

I tend to lean towards writing morning after, what have I done? fic too often, so I wanted to write something where they're both fully aware and consenting to what is happening. For all his supposed faults, I don't think Kakashi would be the type to take it, no matter how frustrated he may get.

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blackestfaery September 26 2011, 05:22:14 UTC
Thank you. I appreciate the comment ;)

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a_lifestyle September 25 2011, 22:19:03 UTC
Gyah. Really beautiful pacing and imagery, as usual. There's always so much tension in your work, and it is super inspiring, a really lovely read. Thank you for sharing!

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blackestfaery September 26 2011, 05:43:23 UTC
there's always so much tension in your work

Mmmm! This makes me so happy :) I seem to fail at every attempt to write smut, so I fall back on writing UST. At the very least, I know I can write that, but someday, I promise you, I will write something where Kakashi and Sakura are sweaty and sore and happy about it ;)

Thanks so much for reading-I'm so flattered that you found it lovely and inspiring!

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