Rough Draft for a Hummer commercial

[blackheartbill]

Deb looked at the wreck that had been her car. It was a junkpile now and not really likely to be salvaged or seen before she eventually died from the engine fire that already was blanketing the front of the Lexus breathing slowly towards her unconscious form. She idly thought that if knew she was going to die today she wouldn't have just thrown on

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[pendulums]

Genius.

[blackheartbill]

Thanks, I'd like to call it sub-genius if I had too.

[eccentricnb]

i think the title sinches the deal for me. So, because i'm doing penance (doing a persian) in this life, does that mean i'm set for the here after?