Comments | blackhemlock: Fic: Chosen. (Part V)

blackhemlock

Fic: Chosen. (Part V)

Aug 02, 2010 23:22

Title: Chosen.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They stole him. Just a little. Seconds of him, snatched out of time, out of space, taken beyond the World. To protect it. To protect Him.

( Part V )

fic, coe, ianto/jack, jack/ianto, chosen., ianto jones, torchwood

Comments 45

sailor_shipper August 3 2010, 00:18:20 UTC

That was awsome. I love fics where Ianto has a conection to the faries, and CoE fix its are even better. Love how damm kick ass and scary he was while acting as a mouth pice for them. Thanks so much for posting this.

blackhemlock August 4 2010, 10:10:47 UTC

Thank you. I have to admit, whilst I love CoE fix-its I didn't want a cliche and the Faeries solved that one for me.

I am really glad that you found him scary - because I thought he should be just a little insane and mad. The Faeries are and the Wild is so naturally he would be too.

Thanks for commenting.

songspinner9 August 3 2010, 00:51:02 UTC

This is a really well thought-out concept and it worked beautifully! Everyone was totally in character as far as I could see and it flowed nicely as a story.

blackhemlock August 4 2010, 10:13:02 UTC

Thank you so much. Everytime someone thinks they are in character I have to pull out my victory dance because - yay! that is what I am aiming for!

Thank you!

backrose_17 August 3 2010, 01:07:06 UTC

That was brilliant. I love COE fixs it and I loved your use of the faeries in this. They work, of course they would have gotten involed if a chosen one was in danger.

And then angry when he realised that no one had recorded it.-I cracked up at the line. That would so be a Jack reaction.

blackhemlock August 4 2010, 10:16:50 UTC

It really would - Jack would be like - I was there, kissing a hot man on tv and you MISSED IT!!! ... Until Ianto reminds him that it must be on YouTube somewhere ;)

I am really glad you enjoyed it.

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Re: wow blackhemlock August 4 2010, 10:13:48 UTC

Wow - thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

blissfullyd August 3 2010, 03:12:01 UTC

This is really lovely. I love this portrayal of the Janto relationship -sweet, but not soppy and completely in character. And your Ianto seriously kicks some ass.

blackhemlock August 4 2010, 10:18:44 UTC

I don't think that Jack and Ianto could really pull off soppy - but they are definately sweet!

Of course he kicks ass - anyone who can manage Jack's schedule has to be kick ass.

Thanks x