Fic: I Lost Myself to the Moonlight Glow 2/?

[blackhemlock]

Title: I Lost Myself to the Moonlight Glow
Pairing: Edward/Jacob (main), Edward/Bella (beginning), some Bella/Jacob & all other canon pairings
Warnings: this will be slash people so if that does not float your boat don't read this.
Rating: T
Summary: Werewolves are vicious and insane. They care about nothing but the kill and the Moon. They are

Comments

[avashida]

!!! I was so excited when I saw this had been updated! :D

And it's just as beautifully written as the first part! I admit I'm completely confused now about who/what the werewolf is, BUT THAT'S OKAY BECAUSE SURELY WE'LL FIND OUT?

I love how in character everyone is. And Rosalie - I know most people don't really like her, but that moment when she punched the wall was perfect. I like getting to see that side of her. Too many writers make her just a really shallow blonde...

And I loved Jacob's thought processes, too. His reactions are so real, and I love the conflict about feeling sorry for vampires, and the whole mess with the love triangle, wanting Edward to live and accepting that why he wants that is selfish.

Definitely can't wait for more! :D

[blackhemlock]

Well that's a relief because I swear that the chapter was trying to kill me... If I had read it one more time I might have destroyed something (though not the laptop. The laptop = love!).

Remarkably, I find Rosalie quite easy to write. She is interesting because she is cold rather than a bitch but she does have feelings. But thank you. Originally, I saw Emmett punching the wall but when I started typing Rosalie decided that was hers.

And Jacob is love. He really is. Because he is a genuinely good guy - all my Twilight friends agree... We want a Jacob of our own!

As for finding out who the werewolf is... When did I promise that? I don't remember giving such assurances. ;p

Thanks!

[kalijackson]

oh wow...i really love how you have written this chapter! i cant wait for the next one...i was so excited to see that this was updated ^_^

[blackhemlock]

Thank you - I am really glad that you liked it. I wasn't too keen but then I suppose you will always find things to pick at.

I hope you enjoy the next one too...

Mwah x

[jazzyboles]

This Chapter is Great!! I love the way its written, cant wait for the next chapter.

[blackhemlock]

Thank you!

[lilangelz429]

I love how you portray Bella to us.

And how in depth your Jacob's character really is. He finally has taken off his Bella's rose tainted glasses to see what she really is!!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

[idram_]

This is such a good story. I love how you're portraying Jacob and Bella. I hope you update soon, so I see how all of this unfolds :)