Drabble:Opportune Moment

Mar 03, 2008 17:58

 Written for the "I should have..." prompt at
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geekmama March 4 2008, 00:00:52 UTC
First thought: Mmmmm... yes!

Second thought: But... what about Will? She was pretty obsessed, and he ain't exactly chopped liver.

Third thought: Can't get away from "...her head on Jack’s bare chest, hearing his heartbeat in her ears, her rum-tainted breath mingling with his, and their dreams sailing away together into the tropical night."

Mmmmm...!!

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blacklilac17 March 4 2008, 21:37:23 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I enjoyed writing this one a lot, and I'm so glad you like it! Will... well, screw Will! I'm very proud of that sentance, glad you enjoyed it!

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crazyevildru March 4 2008, 01:31:20 UTC
oh i love this! it's so damn sweet! so beautiful- she really should have, but then disney wouldn't have let us have the movie! heehee

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blacklilac17 March 4 2008, 21:37:55 UTC
Yes, this should so have happened... damn Disney! Thank you very much!

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djarum99 March 4 2008, 02:37:58 UTC
Oh, yeah. I'm not sure she should have, but I can certainly picture her fantasizing about what would have happened if she did. Great work :-)

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ditte3 March 4 2008, 07:40:58 UTC
Thanks dARLING.iT'S BEAUTIFUL.

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spooky_sez March 4 2008, 11:30:20 UTC
Great!

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