Comments | blacklilac17: Drabble: Death of a Legend

blacklilac17

Drabble: Death of a Legend

Mar 09, 2008 14:17

Drabble in response of the Black Pearl challange at

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potc, drabble, sparrabeth

Comments 14

awickedwench March 9 2008, 18:34:57 UTC

The legend was dead, the man survived.

Beautiful! Really well done!

blacklilac17 March 9 2008, 22:46:07 UTC

Thank you so much! I was very proud of that last line... Glad you liked it! I went through so much frustration, trying to cut this drabble down to 100 words!

djarum99 March 9 2008, 19:22:04 UTC

Great last line, and a beautiful drabble.

(BTW, the link on blackpearlsails seems to be broken)

blacklilac17 March 9 2008, 22:47:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very proud of that line! Thanks for telling me about the link, I fixed it! This is the second time my links don't work on blackpearlsails, so I'm getting used to it...

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blacklilac17 March 9 2008, 22:48:46 UTC

Thank a lot, everyone seems to like that last line! It took me a while to figure out a Sparrabeth drabble that involves the Pearl, because I just can't imagine both the Pearl and Elizabeth having a place in Jack's heart, I have no idea why.

crazyevildru March 9 2008, 23:06:03 UTC

oh this was beautiful! poor jack!

blacklilac17 March 10 2008, 01:20:45 UTC

Thank you! I feel so sorry for Jack after reading everyone's comments...

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blacklilac17 March 10 2008, 01:23:55 UTC

I wanted to write about why the Pearl was destroyed, but first of all I couldn't think of a reason, and second, I just didn't have enough space!!! I worked so hard on cutting this down to 100 words! I think Jack might have destroyed the Pearl himself, because I think he can't have with both Elizabeth and the Pearl, because they're both so important to him. Anyways, thanks a lot for the comment! Glad you like it!