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h a l l o w [five | gamma]

Jan 17, 2015 01:09

title: h a l l o w [five | gamma]
Pairing: Chapter focus: Minho/Onew, Jonghyun/Kibum, Yixing/Yifan*, Sehun/Tao*
Rating: R/NC-17 (a b o u t damn time | note: see bolded for each chapter ( Read more... )

minew, hallow, minho, minhonew, tofuho, chaptered, onmin, rating: nc-17, pairing: onew/minho, onho, onew, jongkey

Comments 10

kii993 January 17 2015, 19:38:37 UTC

Oh my gosh I am smiling like a fool! This chapter is everything, thank you for your priceless work <3 I never expected to like Onew but I love him now lol. He really made me go "aaaaww" at the end! I love Onew's mother and the travelers' world too. It is brilliant! I don't know how you come up with all these amazing plot lines but I'm in awe. Bless you. Jongkey - wow I didn't see it coming, damn it was great! The girl tho lmao I would eavesdrop too ;) I love your onho, that's a given by now. Don't even get me started...I apologize for not listing every single thing that I like but I'd have to quote the whole chapter! I really love each and every scene, it's ridicolous :') One of the things I like most about this verse is that we get to see Onew AND Jinki. I missed Jinki but Onew was so fun and (unexpectedly) sweet! I really appreciate the way he and Minho interact ^^ Let me say it once again: this chapter is p e r f e c t! Thank you!

blacknerdjade March 16 2015, 15:54:50 UTC

Thank you for reading it! I don’t come up with these things. The plot bunnies attack me at night. They are relentless rabid little things. 
Onew is a big ole softie. He as his own set of rules and his own way of thinking, but at the heart of it, there is just affection. He just deals with it…crazily.
And Onew will be back; better and as larger than life as he always is!

tendrejoue January 18 2015, 00:37:07 UTC

Okay I'm about to travel soon! Spotting it is! :D

tendrejoue January 19 2015, 11:36:00 UTC

Okay, I'm back haha! This was an amazing chanter, we get to know Onew and he is such a fun character, I'm still intrigued by his origins, will we know more about his people? Also I just died at Jinki coming back and acting like a princess hahaha! Please keep his hair!!! Minho is so wrong for suggesting such a thing!! I also really liked Minho in this, him being an omega is such a curse when it shouldnt be I hope Jinki helps him be more free and himself. :) see you at the next update! Thanks for continuing this, I'm so excited for each update!!! Xx.

blacknerdjade March 16 2015, 15:52:15 UTC

Jinki did all that complaining about having servants and having people treat him like royalty and the moment his pitiful sleep is interrupted by some sun, he’s the first one crying to them!
Jinki’s hair is like one of my absolutely favorite things about him in this. I will NEVER cut his hair. If I was handy enough with photoshop I would GIVE HIM THE HAIR. DOWN TO HIS BUTT. …well maybe like the middle of his back LOL

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blacknerdjade March 16 2015, 15:49:56 UTC

The family aspect warmed my heart. It did. I love both of their mothers. And we aren’t done with either of them yet. They will be back and be back all badass too! I can’t wait for it!

You are ab-so-lutely right about Onew. You’ve figured him down to a science! Onew is actually very very special. Not just because he is Jinki’s wolf; but the fact that he’s been “in love” in his own way with Caelo and in essence Minho long before Jinki even realized it makes his “over protectiveness” of Minho seem insane, but it’s very rational. Onew isn’t operating on the same realm of thought that Jinki is. His attraction to Minho is pure. He just wants him.

I -loved- your analysis!

sabsah January 20 2015, 02:23:02 UTC

LOL he IS Inuyasha!!! I knew it!! I'm excited to see how Jinki and Minho interact from now on :'D

Oh and, 3 parts in one update? I love you. Thank you for making my evening haha

blacknerdjade March 16 2015, 15:37:39 UTC

I write a lot in one sitting, its absolutely ridiculous, I lose myself for like TWO whole weeks.

And Yes, he IS Inuyasha! Like the gruff first 50 episodes Inuyasha who doesn't have any manners and a little of the Inuyasha who has grown. LOL

pochnaden January 24 2015, 07:35:07 UTC

You replying means you didn't forget or there was an update. LMFAO!

But seriously, these updates are amazing. ;;;;;;;;;; I'm scared of Onew but he is someone whom I liked.. or more loved to have with Jinki. He's daring and stubborn in a way he'll make you realize there is sense is his.. uhm.. aggression. LOL And I love his encounter with mother and their bonding moments with Minho. UGH ;;;;;;;;;

I'm so eager for the next one but I have to entirely down these first in my system in days. I'm daydreaming about this fic all the time. LOL

Thank you so much, Jade!!!

PS: When you updated, I've commented a loooooooooong one but the connection somewhere glitched it was entirely erased. LMAO

Be safe!!!~

blacknerdjade March 16 2015, 15:30:17 UTC

At this point you are well aware at my terrible attempts of replying to comments in a fashionable time. I'm glad you love me spite my faults LMAO!

Don't be scared of Onew. He's a big ole soft puppy who is grumpy he doesnt' get out a lot. What he doesn't realize (but is starting to realize) is, if he behaves himself, he would get out a lot more. At this point, they co-exist, so Onew is able to talk to Jinki when Jinki allows it, unless Onew jumps shark and just takes over completely. He's hilarious tho. I think I want to pet him LOL