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[blackout_girl]

Title: The Thief

Author: blackout_girl

Characters: Sylar, Elle, with mentions of Noah

Chapter: | 1|2|

Summary: The second time he took her pain, bore it straight from her body. (“Why?”) His eyes bore into hers and she couldn’t help but feel incredibly small (protected) under his watchful gaze. (“I guess I owe you”)

Author’s Note: AU for 3x07 Eris Quod

Comments

[padabee]

I love your writing style - and the story. :D

[liz_will_ow]

I think you're over-doing the parentheses. While they do give the story a unique style, too much is never good.

Other than that, I'm enjoying it!

[dana_serenity]

Oh I'm absolutely in love with your writing style (and personally adore the sections in brackets). It's so poetic, and it fits their relationship so well. It's almost as if you have them dancing.

[dealing_dreams5]

this is so beautiful :)
i really love how you write it's interesting and wonderfull :)
can't wait untill the next chapter

[charmyxrose]

i love the way it was sylar's turn to be the "angel." i can't wait for more.