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[blackout_girl]

Title: Killer

Author: blackout_girl

Characters: Elle, Sylar, Bob, and mentions of Brian Davis

Rating: Strong PG-13, like PG-16.  For violence and suicide.

Summary: Who can understand a psychopath better than a sociopath?  A comparison of two killers' firsts.

Author's Note: My own little response to the awesome-ness of this week's episode.  Spoilers for

Comments

[catyuy]

Love it.

[dragynflies]

Oh, this broke my heart. Poor Elle...I could really see that happening. I wish we'd seen more of Bob on the show, because I always really liked watching the relationship he had with Elle. She always seemed like more of a puppy than a daughter to him.

Of course, if I put your fic in canon, then I'm glad Sylar killed Bob. Cause he had it coming.

[bellonablack]

This was beautifully written. I love your use of language, it was pretty much perfect.

So much emotion here. :-)

[di_elle]

so sad... poor little Elle... thanks the Haitian for wiping all those ugly memories... and yes, i'd love if at some moment in their future, Gabriel would say "i'm glad i've killed your father for what he did to you". too melodramatic? maybe...

He suddenly seemed so small, so insignificant and his heart sank even further, if that was possible. He knew, just as he pushed the chair to the side and felt the rope tighten unbearably around his neck, that his one regret would be that no one else cared. He just wanted one more person to care.

and this... come here, Gabriel, I do care for you, darling... let me hug you...
ahem... #^__^#

[liz_will_ow]

Isn't the lithium supposed to make her stop sending out electricity ('cause it's metal)? That confused me.

Other than that, this was good.