Fight to Run, Die to Live (2/2)

[blackpoetcat_2]

Continuing from Part 1

Comments

[blackpoetcat_2]

Thank you - I'm glad, you enjoyed it :-)

[porridgebird]

Well, you already know - I think this is lovely! One of my favorite bits (strangely enough) is this:

The pirate lifted an eyebrow, tilted his head and put one index finger on his lips, eyes still fixed on Norrington's face. Waiting.

And I really love this:

"No, luv. When Lady Destiny decides it's yer time to die." His smile seemed to be somewhat reflective. "Ye see, it wasn't our time yet. She still has a need for us both, Commodore. Don't cross her plans, it will do ye no good in the afterlife."

then later...

"Remember, luv? Opportune moment? Lady Destiny?"

Nice.

WELL DONE!

[blackpoetcat_2]

I'm so glad you like the stuff, dear; thank you so much for everything!

*hugs bird*

[pyrites_gold]

Yay! I finally got time to read this. And I loved it. xx

[blackpoetcat_2]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed reading :-)

[ajat]

:) :) I finished it :) I LOVE this retelling ! And hey, they can always meet on a sandbank anytime, innit ?

[blackpoetcat_2]

Of course they can! Or just visit each other aboard their ships, no land there ;-)

Thanks for reading + reviewing!

[nautilusl2]

Wonderful read, I really enjoyed it. My god though, when James was dying and Elizabeth left him, I saw a red haze in front of my eyes and all I could think was "THAT BITCH!" Thank god Jack was there to save him, in all the ways a man could be saved. By being loved!

[blackpoetcat_2]

Yes, "my" Jamie deserves someone who really appreciates his nature.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :-)