Natural Rouge (G)

[blackpoetcat_2]

Title: Natural Rouge
Author: blackpoetcat
Rating: G
Characters: James & Elizabeth, Jack
Disclaimer: Mouse owes all, just playing with
Summary: For the prompt 'Rouge' at Blackpearlsails

"Every word you said was a lie!"

Comments

[aletheiafelinea]

Heh, nice one! *g* Well caught characters!

[blackpoetcat]

Thank you :-D

[sharklady35]

Aye, Liz did look more'en passing comely jus' then! Nothing like a wench with her blood fired up.

[blackpoetcat]

Uh, that seems a little bit harsh to me; but nevertheless thank you for reviewing :-)

[sharklady35]

Oh, in what way harsh? It was meant to be a compliment.

[blackpoetcat]

Oops - sorry, seems I misunderstood what you wrote. No native speaker, sorry *blush*

[were_lemur]

That last line ... perfect!

[blackpoetcat]

Thank you so much :-)

[geekmama]

I love that last line, it just seems so right at that moment in the story.

Great drabble! Thank you for sharing it with us.

[blackpoetcat]

You're welcome. Thanks a lot :-)