Title: Abyss
Author:
blackpoetcatRating: R
Character: Derek Wills
Disclaimer: NBC owns all, just playing drama with
Summary: Everyone knows he doesn't give a shit about anything but the show. So when Derek's life capsizes, will anyone give a shit about him?
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I confess, your opinion as an experienced reader and writer (and fan of Jack and his characters) is as important to me as my dear friend porridgebird's. Without her help and beta-work I wouldn't dare to publish any long-term English-written story. She likes this, too, and she agrees with me about Derek being in need to be humbled, to be able to change at all.
*hugs you both*
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(Though I have to make another confession - I'd be lost without 1) dict.leo.org while writing and 2) porridgebird as native speaker for either lack of or fight with some fitting vocabular.)
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