Comments | blackrain588: More lines about shoes.

blackrain588

Oct 25, 2005 19:10

I hate the way heals make my toes numb ( Read more... )

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a small note kkzmissshrtcake October 26 2005, 01:51:45 UTC

I think the second stanza is nearly unnecessary... taking it out almost makes it flow better. Everything fits.

This is awesome I love it!