Wow. I really like it. I'm assigned a list poem or a poem that has repetitive elements, and yours is rather nice. The beginning drew me in. The image of walls yelling at inappropriate times is great and unusual though makes me want to know when would an appropriate time be?
I will give you more critiques tomorrow, but bask in the glow of compliments today.
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I will give you more critiques tomorrow, but bask in the glow of compliments today.
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