forsaken

[blackstains]

Dark are the sins of the sweetest hue

Comments

[wingz_n_mist]

Ok this is something I wrote, but I can't let most of my friends see(they'd be sad and paranoid) but yeah can you PLZ tell me what you think?

Living behind a mask,
Inside a cracking shell,
I'm freaking tired of this place,
It feels like Hell.
Smashing the mirror with my fist
When I see my hideous face
Can't stand the inner reflection,
I'm such a disgrace.
Scars inside from tearing my soul apart
This world is so fucked up,
It's blackened my heart.
This pain is too strong.
Why can't it just let me be?
Life's too long and it's persecuting me.
Take the knife
Slit-slit
Let it run deep.
Crimson blood,
Please set me free.
Loosing my life (each night),
Fall into my bed,
Closing my eyes,
Breath deep.
It'll be okay.
The monster is dead.
The evil monster is freaking dead.

[blackstains]

i think.... it fits many of us and extreamly well written *hugs*

[peckerberry]

*hugs* Its prettyful. I like it.

I needa talk to you...soon?

[blackstains]

okies~

[peckerberry]

haha~guess what...
We're talking now!

[blackstains]

LOL