Auh! Anguish! Oh my goodness, I think I need my inhaler. Fatality, that was beautiful. Your imagery was absolutely breathtaking and the song fit perfectly. Both characters are flawlessly in character, and that makes the drabble even more wonderful. The last long paragraph made my heart clench up! I can see the whole thing in my mind, wonderful word choice! Your last three lines tie the story to an end very gracefully. Kudos! I bow at your feet for this masterpiece! Let the words flow, eh? ^__^
Ah, thank you. Drabbles in this category to come next:
Galcian/Ramirez - "The Point of No Return", from Phantom of the Opera
Ramirez/Vyse/Fina - "The Riddle, Part Three" from the Scarlet Pimpernel
Got any more ideas for me? Anything I've seen or heard that would work in this category? I'm toying with a Leon/Wolf one from Star Fox, but I gotta find a song...let me know. So glad you like this. Much love.
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Galcian/Ramirez - "The Point of No Return", from Phantom of the Opera
Ramirez/Vyse/Fina - "The Riddle, Part Three" from the Scarlet Pimpernel
Got any more ideas for me? Anything I've seen or heard that would work in this category? I'm toying with a Leon/Wolf one from Star Fox, but I gotta find a song...let me know. So glad you like this. Much love.
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I need to see more musicals.
... You're writing a Ramirez/Vyse/Fina drabble? I'd like to see how that turns out.
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Where've you been all week?
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