Fic: Selfie In Blue, Part VI

[blacktop50]

“This your idea of a safe house, John

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[rose_griffes]

Now that the voice in his ear was silent, all those scratchy thoughts and coiling emotions that threatened to swamp him escaped in a stuttering sigh.

I love your wording here.

John's retelling of his dad's stories as if they were his is both sweet and sad. Bedtime for the daughter he won't have...

[blacktop50]

Yes, Reese's stolen stories was one moment of several that brought tears to my eyes. He is trying out the new feel of having a wayward child; as you say, a lament for the daughter he'll never have.