DMC Fic update

Oct 29, 2006 20:38

Yeah...I ended up liking the writing of chapter two--but don't get too hopefull!!!--I might not write three, I'll just keep telling myself that so writing it seems more pleasant. XD ( Read more... )

devil may cry, fic, dante/vergil, 3

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MEOW akiroche October 30 2006, 09:02:10 UTC
OH WOW!!! HAhhhaa omgggggggggg I LOVE IT ^^ and to know that Sparda SAW them O_O hahah ^^. Now since we've all got some backround of thier past ^^, then you can continue with the Temen ni Guru tower and then they meet ^^ Oooooo. Like when they meet, of course Dante would ask the questions first, but it'll be similar to what Dante acted like to Vergil when Dante wanted to kiss Vergil for the first time ^^;. Then Vergil would refuse it and Dante would remenese the past to Vergil. Vergil would remember but be in denial but then well you can put some commentary and all sorts inbetween. Lets say they fight some ^_^ (weaken each other meow hhaha). haha then when Vergil is right in front of those pole looking things ontop of Temen Ni Guru, Dante would quickly push Vergil to the wall and force in a kiss as he drops his sword. should Vergil be pushing him away again, or try to push him away but doesnt want to ^_^. I dunno theres so much to go on but yeahh I"m just giving ideas ;P NIIIIIIIICE BEAUTIFUL STORY!

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Re: MEOW blackvoodoomage October 30 2006, 13:49:31 UTC
Thanks Aki-chan! Your suggestions really helped when I write, I hope you saw some of yours in there when you read it!

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^^ puffyduffy777 October 30 2006, 13:40:44 UTC
He grabbed him by the ankles? Thats sounds kinda familar. hehehe. I don't really think Dante is safe, even if the door is locked beacuase Sparda is.......... Sparda. Hes just going to knock down the door. A little lock isn't going to stop him! Dante! Get out of there! Jump out the window!!!! You should make Vergil throw and egg at sparda's head. rofl! Its good for the hair anyway.( Or was it shaving cream?)

Your bouncing knee buddy,
Vergil! (With new and improved action phrases!)

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Re: ^^ blackvoodoomage October 30 2006, 13:52:18 UTC
HAHAH, that's what I thought! But y'see, I think that's really scary when someone does that, so I put it into the story. Hey...you know what they say--reality makes better fiction.

But yes, you might be right about Dante not being safe. I mean c'mon, this measly paper door against the Legendary Knight? I-Don't-Tink-Sooo....

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blackvoodoomage October 30 2006, 13:52:51 UTC
PS: I loved the action-phrases thing, c'mon, give me some one-liners.

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puffyduffy777 October 31 2006, 02:22:14 UTC
okies... hehe paper. door...hehe. By the way, beautiful icon!! Shes really pretty. ^^

action phrase one ~~ Your butt is full of shit.
action phrase two ~~ Your butt is STILL full of shit.
action phrase three ~~ I eat ground hogs for breakfast!
action phrase four ~~ I shall stuff your mouth with peas!!
action phrase five ~~ (Insert Vergil getting hurt sounds here)

It would be funny if someone really had a paper door. rofl! Hey, I wanta paper door.... If you get mad and try really hard to slam the door it would just slowly fly down. Like " Shut up you ass-sac!!!!" *slams door* Door-- Swoooooosh. So peaceful.
Heres one more action phrase for you!
action phrase six ~~ TOTHETITLESCREEN!!!!! AWAAAAAAAAAY!

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blackvoodoomage October 31 2006, 11:26:19 UTC
*spits corn muffin all over screen* BWAHAHAHAHAH~~!!! I love your action phrases! I need to figure out where the button for them is, though. (Please God, don't let it be where Chii's 'on' button was)

And you must be feeling extra funny with your little door comment, there. *points*

YES VERGIL, TOOTHIETITTIELYSCREEN! (That's the way I say it...)

Oh, thanks for the icon compliment, by the way. I HAD to put on most of the crap on her face--you know, what a piece of crap!--so all the markings and stuff was me and my good 'ole buddy Photoshop 7. (Who's actually getting quite old, I think he's begining to get outdated. *cries*)

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blackvoodoomage October 31 2006, 11:27:06 UTC
Hey, lookit my other new one: ^^^^

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puffyduffy777 October 31 2006, 11:51:09 UTC
she kind alooks like Jasmin from Aladin.But I like the colors. ^^

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