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[bladderwrack]

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The revolutionaries move
Like ants, carrying with
Themselves ten times their bodyweight
In foreign journalists.

...what, I thought it was funny at five in the morning when I couldn't sleep. Sprung rhythms FTL. ¬_¬

Comments

[p_zeitgeist]

Hey, I think it's funny. And horribly true.

Of course, I'm not sleeping either. It may be a kind of long-distance folie a deux. But I'm still snickering.

[bladderwrack]

Oh well, at least it's not just me.

You know, in the right hands, this could have been nuanced and thought-provoking. Here it is, like. a partially-rhymed snide remark. =_=

[ahpookishere]

I likes it, and I thinks it be funny!

[bladderwrack]

Hey look now it's (not really) a limerick~

The revolutionaries move
Like ants, carrying with
Themselves a freight
Ten times their weight
In foreign journalists.

I AM A TERRIBLE PERSON T_T